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Post by jenrox on Jun 5, 2005 8:28:36 GMT -5
ritey here tis ladies! my bad poem i wrote at 1 in the mornin!! lol enjoy... Now that it's over I love you still But there were people that changed And wrong feelings I feel. I opened my heart and I let you in All you done is hurt me and make me cry Why go on like this? Living one big lie? You took over, tried to control my life All it did was cause upset and strife! No one was there to dry my eyes 'Til I found someone, they took me by suprise Never thought they'd save me like they did stop me from doin so much crazy shi.t I hate the way things change How my life's been rearranged I hate the way you make me feel Treat me like a toy you pick up for a thrill. I hate the way you fill me with guilt But I miss the way you made my heart melt I hate the way everything's my fault I hate the way it's always you, we never have a thought. I hate the way I feel now, I hate the way we started to row I hate the way I miss him more than you I hate the way my heart's split in two. tell me wot you guys think!
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Post by **kay-kay** on Jun 5, 2005 9:16:45 GMT -5
Claps all round for that Sarah!!!!!!! I looooovvvvvveeeeeee it!!!! It's great and hey if writing at 1 in the morning brings out that, i think you should do it more often!!! hahaha Well done hunny!!! k
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Post by Rachel Tribbiani on Jun 6, 2005 16:31:56 GMT -5
wow that one is really good...keep it up...you are very good in writing poems
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Post by jenrox on Jun 7, 2005 16:15:43 GMT -5
hehe ta ladies lol
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Post by **kay-kay** on Jun 8, 2005 9:59:14 GMT -5
No probs Sarah! Your loving it really! hahaha! k
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Post by jenrox on Jun 8, 2005 13:41:45 GMT -5
lol of course!! :-p
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Post by cutechic on Jun 9, 2005 11:53:38 GMT -5
hey.. i ve just visited this section 1st time.. n sarah urs was the 1st poem i read.. its awesome grll..!!
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Post by ~Dreem~ on Jun 10, 2005 1:57:34 GMT -5
you are such a great poet!!!!
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Post by cutechic on Jun 10, 2005 9:25:08 GMT -5
wow... man.. there 's a lot of creativess in here.. keep goin ppl!!!.. its amazing
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Post by jenrox on Jun 10, 2005 13:06:21 GMT -5
I no!! some of the stuff you guys have wrote on here is awsome!!
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Post by ~Dreem~ on Jun 28, 2005 4:32:41 GMT -5
i just wrote a poem, its very short its based from somewhere guess where!
I thought...
I thought you were the one for me I thought our love was so strong But I have thought many thoughts Many which were wrong
It took so long to grow our love So many moments I will cherish But it only took one hurtful deed For our love to perish
I thought you were the one for me I thought our love was so strong But honey it’s too late now In your heart, I don’t belong
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Post by ~Dreem~ on Jun 28, 2005 4:54:33 GMT -5
heres another i just wrote, very cheesy its untitled
you said you loved me what was i to say i had no time i was on my way on my way to a new city a new place a world of the unknown but there you were your words and pleads stuck in my head, plastered everywhere including my heart, my soul my whole world beneath it was you, you and me so meant to be
its it obvious where i got THAT from???
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Post by **kay-kay** on Jun 28, 2005 10:06:41 GMT -5
OMG! Dreem, they are absolutely amazing! Both of them, that first one almost had me in tears... If you don't know, it doesn't take much for me to cry, I'm a leaker, as Jen would put it! lol Great work hun! Keep it up k I should really get back into writing some more.... hhhmmmm an idea for tonight if I'm bored! hehe
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Post by ~Dreem~ on Jun 28, 2005 20:46:16 GMT -5
thanks kay!
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Post by ~Dreem~ on Jun 29, 2005 2:18:56 GMT -5
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