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Post by jenrox on Jan 16, 2005 14:53:46 GMT -5
jenrox your poem is just wonderful!!!!!!!! i loved it!!!!!!! u r a great poet!!!!! hehe you make m blush! lol but thank you I write alot but I shared this one with you guys which is unusual for me because my poetry's quiet private but i'll post some more if anyone wants to read them!  |
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Post by ~Dreem~ on Jan 17, 2005 4:24:06 GMT -5
sure!!!!! that would be great!!!
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Post by **kay-kay** on Jan 17, 2005 17:01:54 GMT -5
Wow great poems you both have there!!!!!! Thanks for sharing!!!!! n jenrulz, I would love to hear more of yours! Infact any, anybody has! lol Poetry is sooo nice, just summit i'm not that good at! lol
k
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Post by MissK on Jan 20, 2005 17:14:32 GMT -5
Wow!! I love all of the banners and poems! They're great! I would definatly love to read more!! Awesome job guys ;D
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Post by jenrox on Jan 21, 2005 9:33:34 GMT -5
These ones are kinda old and not very good lol but here y'all go
one:
I was alone and afraid, and then you come into my life,
I couldn't belive how you changed me,
You took care of me through better worse,
When we were together you always came first.
But then you had to leave, you believe how much I cried,
I was a whole and then you were gone,
I don't know what happened we'd been together so long,
You picked a hole in the seam, then you uttered those words and the whole thing ripped.
My heart was fragile, just like a doll,
Then you came and shattered it all in one go,
I wanted to run, I wanted to hide,
But I couldn't escape the feelings inside.
Anger was soon flowing through me just like blood,
But I stopped my tears and ended the flood,
I realised that you wasn't worth it,
I cna't believe what I put myself through,
I was becomin as bad as u!
But now I've moved on and don't cling to hope any more,
I stopped doing that when you walked out the door,
Now I hope that you'll be happy forever,
But die the way you made me did, because now I'm up in heaven where I can't feel it.
two:
She said she couldn't leave you,
You were her one and only,
But she was so blind, and couldn't see you'd leave her sad and lonely.
For months on end you proved me wrong,
Until it stopped, I new it wouldn't take long,
Then her eyes were streaming, but not as bad as her wrist,
All these feelings that she felt, way to long to write the list.
Standing there I thought I saw her face haunting face starin back,
I blame you for stealing her life,
We were together every single day, then one moment she just faded away.
How could you do that and not even care?
I hope you feel the pain you inflicked on her,
If I could change they way that things were,
Gladly I'd swap you b.as.tard for her.
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Post by **kay-kay** on Jan 21, 2005 11:11:29 GMT -5
Wow, them poems are amazing!!!!!!!!! You are really talented! They seem so real!! lol You are really good! Keep posting them! lol
k
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Post by jenrox on Feb 27, 2005 8:03:42 GMT -5
Hey guys I was just re-reading through the thread and thought no- one's posted anything for aaaaaaaages n wondered if anyone had anything else to share! I'm working on some more stuff to show you guys but would love to hear anything that other people have! |
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Post by **kay-kay** on Feb 27, 2005 14:59:44 GMT -5
Well i wrote a poem lately and i started writing it and it was for Jen, but then i explored a different zone and it totally went off from Jen... but i'll share it anyway! Plz don't laugh... I aint good a poetry!!! lol Star? Something that shines so bright in a crowd, Nothing can bring this fallen angel down, Everything she does is all for us, She proudly wears her golden crown. Yet benieth her skin is an empty zone, Holding secrets that are unknown, We prey to god to save her soul, For what we can see is an empty hole. It's not great... but still!  lol k |
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Post by jenrox on Mar 1, 2005 17:48:55 GMT -5
Aww hun! *claps*! lol that's really good!! I love the part 'nothing can bring our fallen angel down' that is so touching. I love it! you're a great poet keep it up!! ;D
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Post by ~Dreem~ on Mar 2, 2005 0:59:20 GMT -5
excellent work guys!!!!!!
keep on sharin!!!!!
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Post by **kay-kay** on Mar 3, 2005 14:00:30 GMT -5
Aww hun! *claps*! lol that's really good!! I love the part 'nothing can bring our fallen angel down' that is so touching. I love it! you're a great poet keep it up!! ;D Aaawww thanks!! I didn't think it was that good either! lol I've read yours and yours is amazing!! Well all need to keep up the good work! hehe k |
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Post by sophie on Mar 10, 2005 1:54:49 GMT -5
wow.. good job!! everybody!!!it's so impressive ;D  i don't even know what to say.. |
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Post by ~Dreem~ on Mar 18, 2005 1:24:41 GMT -5
hey everyone!
k i wrote my story for the newspaper comp yesterday
it had a starting bit and i had to finish it off
i wrote about a girl who was on holidays and one day her legs become paralysed
i called it Sunshine engulfed by Darkness
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Post by jenrox on Mar 21, 2005 16:27:31 GMT -5
Kool name! Good luck with that!!
But guys I'm really happy I found my writing thought of mind again! So I no my poem is really really bad! lol but i wrote again n I'm really happy with myself! so here it goes:
Got You
I tried to hate you,
I tried to forget,
But my feelings to strong,
The pain I couldn't reject.
I waited for you, and thought it'd never pay off,
But now it has,
I no longer feel lost.
Now that I'm with you, I'm the best I could ever be,
Because you love me,
You love me for me.
No one's ever made me feel the way you do,
This is so surreal, seems to good to be true,
I never thought it'd end up this way coz i really missed you.
I love you hun and always have,
You stole my heart and won't ever give it back.
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Post by **kay-kay** on Mar 21, 2005 16:58:05 GMT -5
OMG, hunny that is amazing!! *claps all round* That was soo good! You should be proud of that! And i love the name Dreem...very original! Well done Sarah ;D k |
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