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Post by ~Dreem~ on Jul 15, 2005 19:52:38 GMT -5
no problem sophie OH BTW IM BACK!
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Post by cutechic on Jul 15, 2005 21:33:48 GMT -5
hey dreem welcome back hun!!...lol.. ya know y im laughin right..??
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Post by **kay-kay** on Jul 16, 2005 15:35:56 GMT -5
Hey Dreem, welome back! Tasha, you laugh ALL the time! lolol k
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Post by cutechic on Jul 16, 2005 23:54:47 GMT -5
well on a second thought... yeah!!...lol..!! i laugh at my own jokes..lol.. tht states a lot!!
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Post by sophie on Jul 17, 2005 6:41:20 GMT -5
hey everybody can i ask u a favor? lol which one do u think is better? between these two writing.s. lol i know they are both not good but please don't say 'neither'.. that would really embarrass me lol!!
ok..i here ..look lol
Have you ever felt that way? That you can't live without someone Trying to tell yourself that you can but realizing at last that you really need someone someone to stay with someone to share someone to give your heart
Have you ever felt that way? That you want to protect someone forever Trying to calm yourself down but realizing that your heart is so strong that you can't control
Have you ever realize that your heart is stuck on someone and can't get out of there
I can't forget you I wanna see you everyday and hold you in my arms
this one and..........
I ran into her just saying hello makes my heart beat just seeing her smile makes me happy all day
I saw her walking in front of me seeing her back, looking at her steps, I think 'she is adorable'
Thinking that maybe I can see her tomorrow makes me laugh
I saw her teaching little children seeing her sitting on a chair seeing her talking with microphone I think 'she is beautiful'
Everytime I see her I want to say 'I love you' but I wonder if I can
Everytime I see her I wish her a lifetime of happiness and think 'she is charming'
Then I kiss her away A beautiful angel she is.
what do u think? lol i think in the second one..the point of view is man lol lol please tell me which one is better. lol thanks!!
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Post by sophie on Jul 17, 2005 6:44:20 GMT -5
oh and cutechic??/or Tasha?? is that your name?? anyway wow u r right!!! The definition of beautiful='jennifer'? wow that's totally true lol that's .exactly the phrase i was looking for! kllol
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Post by cutechic on Jul 17, 2005 7:32:29 GMT -5
hey sophie... man ur poems r seriously amazing... i have read a few n i like them all!!. good tht ya cleard the point of view in the 2 one...lol!!. btw my name is natasha... but everyone calls me tasha!..
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Post by rachifer on Jul 17, 2005 8:01:38 GMT -5
Wow!! They are both awesome!!!
I actually like the first one slightly better but that's just my point of view!! They are both really really good! ;D
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Post by sophie on Jul 17, 2005 8:38:40 GMT -5
thanks everybody lol n that's a pretty name natasha lol
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Post by **kay-kay** on Jul 17, 2005 10:31:26 GMT -5
Firstly, I like the 2nd one better Sophie, I think you;re really talented to be able to write such a great poem from a differnet point of view! They are both amazing, but the 2nd one for me!
Secondly, Tasha you make me laugh!!!! lmao When you said you laugh at your own jokes, I choked on my drink! You aint 1/2 funny hun! lol
k
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Post by cutechic on Jul 17, 2005 12:23:12 GMT -5
kay... im glad tht i can make ya laugh...lol.. btw i must say its mutual... c uz ya dun know how hard i laugh at ur crazzy jokes!!...lol... n thnx sophie!!
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Post by sophie on Jul 18, 2005 3:40:20 GMT -5
hmm. thanks kay.. i'm confused. lol tasha says first one is better and kay u say second one is better. hmm.. and hey Natasha!!! you are already senior member? aren't u quite new here? !!!!!!
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Post by cutechic on Jul 18, 2005 9:22:32 GMT -5
umm well i joined in may ... but i just loveeeeeeeeee this place hun!!!.. its soo coooooool!!!
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Post by sophie on Jul 20, 2005 0:08:35 GMT -5
gosh?!!! really? may?this may?!!!!!hmm..that's only about two weeks ago.. lol
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Post by **kay-kay** on Jul 20, 2005 9:09:06 GMT -5
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